RE - Manny!

I'm going to be honest but I don't see a lot of difference between the two. Granted the two on the left have more realistic proportions and the lines are a lot thicker. Also the pose looks more realistic and a little less stiff. That's good! But they also have the same head shape and you can see things through their hair/heads/bodies. I know you like making things look "sketchy", heck I do sometimes, but sometimes it gives a picture an unfinished look. Unless that's what this is meant to be - a sketch? I know you've done "complete" pictures that look just fine. Just my two cents.